tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post5039362522360240424..comments2012-05-30T09:20:40.528-07:00Comments on Ellen's Blog: poem 6Ellenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01509992610214227472noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-49554248595839070812012-05-11T13:43:57.260-07:002012-05-11T13:43:57.260-07:00This is really pretty hilarious. I love your lyri...This is really pretty hilarious. I love your lyric inclusions and the situation is pretty laughable. Loved it :)~*ChelleAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18398395750895794441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-67052099211251058842012-05-07T10:51:14.696-07:002012-05-07T10:51:14.696-07:00Ellen,
Really clever. The only thing that stoppe...Ellen,<br /><br />Really clever. The only thing that stopped me was the inclusion of three characters. They're introduced so quickly that I don't have time to understand the relationships.<br /><br />I'd agree with Emu and Rachel that this could be even longer. <br /><br />DaveDavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03007804760439414596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-19407415353993013572012-05-05T13:40:20.241-07:002012-05-05T13:40:20.241-07:00This poem was so silly and made me giggle! I liked...This poem was so silly and made me giggle! I liked the use of the lyrics into the poem, especially the line, "every time you see me that Hammer's just so hype." This poem reminded me of all those cliched stories in the movies where the repair guy comes to the house to fix something and the housewife tries seducing him. I do think this poem has a great beginning and it makes me want to know more!Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11425634313715214069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-62176369389644240592012-05-05T07:02:05.061-07:002012-05-05T07:02:05.061-07:00i like this alot. Very very clever. The sex-crav...i like this alot. Very very clever. The sex-craving housewife is a great character to bring into any poem. I also like the cat like hiss that she emits. Do you think you could make this a longer poem? I am not sure if other lyrics could fit into the story but its got a lot of potential and a great beginning!emuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07124178872177775896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-3373771123438434982012-05-04T16:59:48.315-07:002012-05-04T16:59:48.315-07:00Sorry I didn't realize the title was in the mi...Sorry I didn't realize the title was in the middle of the poem. I hope those are happy exclamation points...or at least not fearful...Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01509992610214227472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-28176730359702024492012-05-04T12:46:12.139-07:002012-05-04T12:46:12.139-07:00!!!!!!!!Davehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03007804760439414596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497703407839533517.post-42350221013007386962012-05-04T10:57:09.536-07:002012-05-04T10:57:09.536-07:00This is hilarious, I love how you fit "everyt...This is hilarious, I love how you fit "everytime you see that hammer's just so hype"Emily Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346199912099819699noreply@blogger.com